I'd like feedback on my article: Holographic Technology

  1. Matt J Bruns profile image54
    Matt J Brunsposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Holographic Technology (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks! I have added all I can and it still is not approved. Why is Hubpages so picky? This should be good enough.

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Your article is way too short. It's also a little muddled, and you use a lot of passive voice.

      https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … tellar-Hub

      That link may help you.

  2. psycheskinner profile image81
    psycheskinnerposted 2 months ago

    You give absolutely no reason for me to believe the predictions you make are accurate, or any reason why people should care one way or the other.

    Adding these elements (e.g. demonstrating expertise and the reasoning behind the prediction and its timing) will add the length you need,

 
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