https://hubpages.com/relationships/Is-Dating-An-Older-Man-Wise

  1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image69
    Rosa Ann Crowderposted 3 months ago

    My hub has been published but not featured. Please help me detect my mistakes. I also need advice. Thank you so much. Rosa

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image98
      Jeremy Gillposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      Here are my suggestions:
      1) Add a question mark to your title.
      2) Make at least some of your half-width capsules full-width, especially because HubPages is going to eliminate and alter half-widths within the next few months.Even if they weren't, some of your capsules (especially the quotes) would look much better with a bit more width.
      3) There's a few minor grammar errors. Mostly extra commas.
      4) The ending quote is nice, but there might be a better way to wrap things up.

      This Hub shouldn't be too far away from being featured. A few tweaks and you'll be there. Best of luck.

      1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image69
        Rosa Ann Crowderposted 3 months agoin reply to this

        Thank-you Jeremy

 
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