I'd like feedback on my article: Benefits Of Ceramic Garden Planter Pots And...

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   Shaivi231posted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Benefits Of Ceramic Garden Planter Pots And Tips To Buy (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      Jeremy Gillposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Here are my suggestions:
      
      1) Proofread; there are many minor grammar errors. For example, read the first sentence, "Ceramic garden pots are one of most common pots preferred by the people due to various benefits."  There should be a "the" before "most."
      
      2) Put pictures/videos throughout your article rather than just at the very end.
      
      3) This Hub is way too short. Strive for 700 words, preferably more.
      
      Best of luck.

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      Marketing Meritposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Self-promotion is not permitted. You will need to remove the two links and also the photo promoting your website.

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   pen promulgatesposted 7 years ago

   The are punctuation errors that make your sentences long and difficult to read.
   
   Whether you are looking pots for your home decoration or want to get pots which match your home interior or exterior then ceramic pots will go perfectly.  Put a coma before 'then.' there are more examples where a comma is missing before then.
   
   When it comes to choosing pots people often think to choose many trendy designs. Put a comma after 'pots.'
   
   'When it comes buy ceramic pots online never go with one price try to check the price of the pots in other online stores as well.'
   It should d be
   'When it comes to buying ceramic pots online, never go with one price. Try to check the price of the pots in other online stores as well.'
   
   Your sentence structure could improve:
   'People are recommended to have holes in the bottom of these pots in order to have proper drainage which improves the growth of the plant.'  It sounds very awkward this way.
     'To enhance growth of the plants, experts recommend to make drainage-holes
   in the bottom of the pots.'
   
   'Never choose the first online store you get rather it's important to check for a number of gardening online stores as you will get a list of best online stores.  Break the sentence for readability.
   
   'Never choose the first online store that the search results show. You may fail to notice the other more useful stores otherwise. It's essential to check three-to-four gardening stores online for best options.'
   I have a hub 'how sentence structure will fail you in quality.' please read if you feel like.
   
   Other issues have been already highlighted by Jeremy and Marketing merit.
   
   Hope these help.
   Good luck.

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