I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here is my article: EIGHT TIPS FOE BOOSTING INCOME THROUGH ONLINE
Hey there, the introduction had a problem...here: 'making money' is repeated more than 3 times. Why not varied the phrase with similar synonyms? That would tell Google panda that you're not key stuffing the text. Sorry, I don't read pass the introduction because of repetition and tone of monotony. But a device, Language Tool, can you. Go and download the free edition. It helps. Notice the word 'FOE', in the title, obviously an error. It's 'For'. If all the body of the write is balanced, an editor would not snip it. Thanks.
You need to add a bio to tell the reader why you are qualified to write on this topic.
Bio and summary. I do not see anyone ever finding this or his other articles so he will struggle to even reach the 1000 accolade.
Ok I will
There's a typo in your title ("FOE" instead of "FOR")
Your title is also an sentence fragment. "Eight Tips For Boosting Income Through Online...." through online what, exactly?
Also, TURN OFF YOUR DAMN CAPS LOCK IT LOOKS LIKE YOU ARE SHOUTING AT THE READER.
Yes, I agree, I was looking for a way to make my enemies bigger, so I was most disappointed to discover that the article isn't actually about "foe boosting".
Ok sir thanks for info
Download the free version of Grammarly. It will check your text for grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Add photos to your article from Unsplash.
Your use phrases like "tremendous amount of money" and "rich remuneration" when referring to the rewards of online writing, and you say that we can earn a "handsome amount of money" from doing online surveys. You need to include authoritative references to support these ideas and examples of your own financial success from online writing and doing surveys.
Your need to proofread the article. There are two spelling mistakes in the last subtitle, for example. A grammatically correct title and a photo with a suitable license would also be helpful in getting your article featured.
Thanks so much for your info
This is a topic many people right about. Unless you have a genuine innovation that earns huge money, it's impossible to break into.
That's right or 'That's write'? When did we began to think backward? Or are we being serious, or kidding? I've noticed it happen twice in this forun.
Everything will turn out rite in the end!
The free version of Grammarly comes in handy for spellos and choosing correct prepositions etc. However, it won't correct contextual errors like:
This is a topic many people right about.
This is a topic many people write about.
As for formating titles and textbox headings, Shani, use this free online app: Capitalize My Title
Tessa, thanks for pointing out the contextual qudstions.
You have change the “foe” to “for” in the title, so well done. You should also delete the word “through.” Eight Tips For Boosting Income Online…makes more sense.
Also your last subheading: “ERAN INCOME THORUGH ADVERTISEMENT” .. it should be “Earn” not “Eran” and “Through” not “Thorugh.”
As others have said though, it would be better if only the first letter of the words in the titles were capitalised, not the whole word.
That makes much sense. Thanks.
Sure I will
shani Pash, you have made changes to your article and title, however, the title is still grammatically incorrect. Is making online money is reality? It should be Is Maling Money Online a Reality?
I just looked at your new title:
Is making online money is reality? (is = a verb used twice here)
Is making online money a reality?
1. Now copy your title
2. Open this link: Capitalize My Title
3. Paste it
4. Copy it
5. Paste it back into your article to replace
Is making online money is reality?
Is Making Online Money a Reality?
But for me, I would change it to:
Is Making Money Online a Reality?
6. Don't forget to bookmark the link Capitalize My Title for future use.
As I mentioned before. this tool can be used for both titles and headings.
While perusing your profile I notice an article title:
Is Globel Warming real? You MUST get the free
Then it would immediately highlight that this title should read:
Is Global Warming real? with an "a", not globel, that ain't noble
'Is Making Money Online A Reality?' is a better title. Notice the small 'a' before 'Reality' is capitalized. Hubpages like it that better. But using the small letter is not wrong. The use of 'is' twice is a negative. That's where the online editing device, Writing Tool, (WT) become signiifcant for a writer. I use grammarly likewise. But I had the final say, not the AI witted robot.
Thanks I will
Ok sir thanks
Shani, most times, your response seems short, and apt to the point. Like: 'Sure I will', Thanks sir', without a grammatical punctuation...either comma, or fullstop (period). Why is that? Punctuation plays a vital role in the tone of a sentence, or statement. The Oxford comma, is now an inportant punctuation mark with hubpages, and Hubpages required you made a knowledgeable use of it. Much thanks.
Talking of Oxford commas, I came across an example today in which one would have been useful. The sentence read something like:
"He spent his time reading books about great men and magazines."
So, are there books about great men and others about great magazines?
The sentence is much clear with an Oxford:
"-- reading books about great men, and magazines
Stephen, you rightly punctuated the last part of the sentence with the Oxford comma. The statement now reads clearer, and makes much sense. Many writers, and even students are not aware of it's use, because they're not taught that in their English class. I was a victim of the issue up to my university days. But leveraging the hubpages forums, and the learning centre, and going online, I've learnt to resolve it. I also learnt that it was made a legal challenge in a High Court. The Oxford University Press, won the case then adopt it as a private brand. Thanks.
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