I'd like feedback on my article: Cardio Workout: Time to Strip off That Extra...

  1. krithi13 profile image63
    krithi13posted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Cardio Workout: Time to Strip off That Extra Weight (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Marketing Merit profile image97
      Marketing Meritposted 3 months agoin reply to this

      "Fewer chances of MI [ Mio Cardinal Infection ]"
      Do you mean myocardial infarction?

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image99
    Rupert Taylorposted 3 months ago

    You have chosen to write in a field that is saturated on the Internet; a Google search for "Cardio Workout" delivers almost 30 million hits.

    There are also several issue with English:
    It's sedentary not sedimentary.
    It's beneficial not benificial.
    Random capital letters appear and also random boldface.
    Subtitles should be in Title Face.
    There is always a space after a punctuation mark.
    "Health Benefits from Regular Cardio Program" capsule is repeated.
    Exclamation points should only be used for expostulation such as Bang! or Wow!

    Try running your article through a free program such as Grammarly to pick up language issues.

    However, I think the biggest problem is attracting readers from the millions of articles on the same topic.

 
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