I'd like feedback on my article: Cardio Workout: Time to Strip off That Extra...

  1. krithi13 profile image73
    krithi13posted 13 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Cardio Workout: Time to Strip off That Extra Weight (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Marketing Merit profile image87
      Marketing Meritposted 13 days ago in reply to this

      "Fewer chances of MI [ Mio Cardinal Infection ]"
      Do you mean myocardial infarction?

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image97
    Rupert Taylorposted 13 days ago

    You have chosen to write in a field that is saturated on the Internet; a Google search for "Cardio Workout" delivers almost 30 million hits.

    There are also several issue with English:
    It's sedentary not sedimentary.
    It's beneficial not benificial.
    Random capital letters appear and also random boldface.
    Subtitles should be in Title Face.
    There is always a space after a punctuation mark.
    "Health Benefits from Regular Cardio Program" capsule is repeated.
    Exclamation points should only be used for expostulation such as Bang! or Wow!

    Try running your article through a free program such as Grammarly to pick up language issues.

    However, I think the biggest problem is attracting readers from the millions of articles on the same topic.

 
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