I'd like feedback on my article: Cardio Workout: Awesome types of routines to...

  1. krithi13 profile image62
    krithi13posted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Cardio Workout: Awesome types of routines to burn the calories. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image99
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 months ago

    Myself and others have already given you some tips on this article and I see made a few changes.

    But, my main concern remains; the topic is a very crowded field and I don't see how your article is going to attract readers.

    There are still several grammar and presentation problems. The headline needs to be in Title Face (Google it) and should not end with a period.

    There are still random bold face phrases and random capital letters.

    Run your article through a free program such as Grammarly to catch spelling and grammar errors.

    It's myocardial infarction not Myo Cardinal Infarction.

  3. krithi13 profile image62
    krithi13posted 2 months ago

    Thank u sir for your valuable information. I will try my level best to bring necessary changes in it.

 
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