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I'd like feedback on my article: How to render love in Life

  1. dpk408 profile image59
    dpk408posted 4 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article How to render love in Life (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. psycheskinner profile image79
    psycheskinnerposted 4 days ago

    The main problem is your English language use.  But you you also repeatedly make assertions that aren't true.  Not all species, even assuming you mean animals, feel love. Some never even meet another of there species but develop in place where they are hatched and never move. And a great many humans never feel romantic love.

    I am sure you have good intent here, but what reader do you feel will want to seek out this hub and how will they benefit from it?

  3. theraggededge profile image95
    theraggededgeposted 4 days ago

    Yes, as Psycheskinner points out, your English is not good enough for HubPages yet. You could go and take some lessons, improve and then come back and try again.

    You can't promote your own book either - it's against the rules.

  4. pen promulgates profile image80
    pen promulgatesposted 4 days ago

    Agreed. Errors start right from the first line. Punctuation is missing too.

 
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