I'd like feedback on my article: Trip to World's second largest Mangrove forest

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    Tripbeesposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Trip to World's second largest Mangrove forest (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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    Jeremy Gillposted 3 months ago

    Tripbees, here are my suggestions:

    1) The article is simply too short; aim for 700 words or more.
    2) Correct grammar errors. For instance, separate these words: atleast.
    3) You have an "overview" capsule, which I believe is discouraged.
    4) Capitalize key words in your title.

    I like your vivid pictures, but you'll need more interesting, error-free writing to get your Hub Featured. Good luck.

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    Tripbeesposted 3 months ago

    Hi Jeremy Gill,
    Thanks for help.. I will consider your suggestions and correct my articles.

 
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