I'd like feedback on my article: What If the World We Live in, Is Not the...

  1. Anmol Deep profile image61
    Anmol Deepposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article What If the World We Live in, Is Not the Actual World? What If Everything We See Is a Simulation? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image97
      theraggededgeposted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      I'm trying to read your hub on a tablet, and it's impossible. Huge blocks of text need to be broken up.

      Needs proofreading as the very first character is a period/full stop. The image at the top of the page looks copyrighted.

      It's missing an introduction to explain what it's about.

      The title is too long.

      Hope that helps

 
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