I'd like feedback on my article: The End of the world

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  1. pramod cherakkara profile image55
    pramod cherakkaraposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: The End  of the world

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    1. Kenna McHugh profile image92
      Kenna McHughposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      The first paragraph has 16% plagiarism, and it's redundant. I recommend keeping it to two sentences without belaboring it. People consciously or unconsciously know that civilizations will perish. It's in our history.

      For example, edit these two sentences to one:

      The end of the world is a topic that has fascinated and terrified humanity for centuries. From ancient myths to modern science fiction, we have grappled with the idea of what might happen to our planet and our species if we were to face extinction.

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      1. pramod cherakkara profile image55
        pramod cherakkaraposted 6 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you

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    2. WriterJanis profile image92
      WriterJanisposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      You certainly have a lot of good info to share. I suggest expanding the size of your opening photo and add more pictures to your article. You need to break down your paragraphs into smaller text sections and have titles for each section.
      Do you have any references to share? If so, please include them in your article? Have you checked out the Learning Center yet? This can be of a great help.

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      1. pramod cherakkara profile image55
        pramod cherakkaraposted 6 months agoin reply to this

        thank you

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    3. erorantes profile image50
      erorantesposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Hello mister pramod I like your article. It is informative about how many cultures and religions have a futuristic outcome that no one knows for certain if the end of humanity will happen. You can read the hub pages learning center to read the rules of writing and comments. Have a good week.

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  2. pramod cherakkara profile image55
    pramod cherakkaraposted 6 months ago

    Thank you

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