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I'd like feedback on my article: 14 Arrangement of Final Fantasy IX Piano...

  1. SeanRosch profile image60
    SeanRoschposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article 14 Arrangement of Final Fantasy IX Piano Collection Full Album Review (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 6 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      Your article has many grammatical errors.  It reads like a bad translation.

      You could try pasting the text into an online checker, such as Grammarly.

  2. nipunsourishiya profile image52
    nipunsourishiyaposted 6 months ago

    Few precautions:
    1. Singular and plural
    2. Use of "I" instead of "i"
    3. Spelling mistakes

    If you read your article carefully, then you will find these mistakes easily. Good Luck.

  3. SeanRosch profile image60
    SeanRoschposted 6 months ago

    Thank you so much, i'm on it

 
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