Dream Therapy and Lucid Dreaming

  1. TessSchlesinger profile image96
    TessSchlesingerposted 5 months ago

    https://hubpages.com/education/Dream-Th … -Your-Life

    I have been asked to fix this article in terms of APP titles, spelling, and grammar. I have fixed what I see, and I cannot see anythng more.

    Please can you read through it before I submit it.

    Many thanks. smile

  2. pen promulgates profile image49
    pen promulgatesposted 5 months ago

    I believe it will still be accepted the way it is (now)

    These I could notice though
    In the sentence 'He maintained that the meaning of a dream was different for each person,' I think maintained doesn't fix the context. You may replace it with a better word perhaps.

    Further below, a line reads ' I fall asleep' it should be fell asleep as rest all is mentioned in the past tense

    'but you have the maturity to accept it is not always possible to fix situations.' I find the sentence vague and unclear in meaning

    'and that what I accomplished was nothing short of miraculous' should it be miracle? Sorry, not sure about this one.

    One of the subtitles ends with a period. You can consider removing it.


    1. TessSchlesinger profile image96
      TessSchlesingerposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you. Will fix all that immediately.

      In British English, one can maintain one's position on a particular topic. It's possible that it doesn't mean the same thing in American English, so I will look for a different word. Thanks.