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I'd like feedback on my article: IPHONE SPECIAL PRODUCT RED

  1. Crellz Jermaine profile image41
    Crellz Jermaineposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article IPHONE SPECIAL PRODUCT RED (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 5 weeks agoin reply to this

      big_smile That's the best hub I've seen this year. Well done.

      And at less than 40 words, you are on to a real winner with this one.

    2. JynBranton profile image83
      JynBrantonposted 5 weeks agoin reply to this

      Definitely needs content #1. There's nothing there. No review, you features, no comparison to former products. You don't offer the reader anything.

      Also Try It, isn't a call out. I usually go back to a key sentence or something that sums up a previous section of the content.

      Once there's more content put breaks. And then use call out, polls, images, video, whatever content you can to enhance the article.

      I always use the tutorial rather than the basic so I can visualize better where I want section breaks and to insert images and media.

      You need to answer a question in your article. Why do we want this product, how does it compare to other similar products, something more than one small paragraph of 50 words.

      Rethink what you're trying to say and give it another go.

      1. theraggededge profile image99
        theraggededgeposted 5 weeks agoin reply to this

        Don't bother, Jyn, he's a spammer.

 
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