I'd like feedback on my article: Top 5 Bollywood Films (2017)

  1. RoshAn AhMer profile image80
    RoshAn AhMerposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Top 5 Bollywood Films (2017) (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 2 months agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      I couldn't read it all because of the excessive amount of linking. Looks horrible, and your hub will never be approved with it. HubPages doesn't want you sending people off the site.

      The article needs a proper introduction.

      Remember this topic is pretty much saturated. Have you tried doing a search for your title? Paste it into Google and see what comes up. Those results are the sites your little hub has to compete with. Do you think anyone is going to find it on the third or tenth page of results?

      Good luck.

      Edit: What is Times of India (TIO)? Surely whatever it is, the acronym is TOI?

      I've just realised that you have copied and pasted all the text from elsewhere on the web. This is not permitted. It's called plagiarism and is, essentially, stealing someone else's work and pretending it is yours. It's definitely not allowed at HubPages. All writing must be original.

      1. RoshAn AhMer profile image80
        RoshAn AhMerposted 2 months agoin reply to this

        thanks for guiding

 
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