I'd like feedback on my article: Athens in Greece. The capital-queen of the...

  1. stelaligizaki profile image63
    stelaligizakiposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Athens in Greece. The capital-queen of the night (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Jeremy Gill profile image96
    Jeremy Gillposted 2 weeks ago

    Here are my ideas:

    1) Improve your title. Make it flow better and capitalize key words.
    2) Add headings to different paragraphs throughout your article.
    3) Increase word count to at least 600, preferably more around 1000.

    Your pictures are vibrant, but Hubs just can't be this short. Add more interesting and relevant content and we'll go from there.

    1. stelaligizaki profile image63
      stelaligizakiposted 13 days agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your immediate response and your helpful comments. My regards, Stella

 
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