I'd like feedback on my article: The Power of the Word of God.

  1. Brianlnathans profile image59
    Brianlnathansposted 8 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article The Power of the Word of God. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. AliciaC profile image100
    AliciaCposted 8 weeks ago

    Hi, Brian. I think the main problem is the Amazon capsule. You are trying to sell a book that you wrote, which isn't allowed on HubPages. In addition, the item in the capsule isn't directly related to the theme of the hub.

    I noticed some other problems. There shouldn't be a period after the title of the article. Some of the subtitles have a capitalization problem according to APA style rules. In addition. the phrase "word of God" or a very similar phrase is used so many times in the article that it sounds unnatural. The repetition may be interpreted as keyword stuffing by search engines. I understand that the article is about the word of God and that this is a very important idea in the hub, but I think you should try to eliminate some of the repetition.

 
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