I'd like feedback on my article: Rising obesity in India - Part 1

  1. Prankita profile image73
    Prankitaposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Rising obesity in India - Part 1. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. DrMark1961 profile image99
      DrMark1961posted 2 months agoin reply to this

      How many words are the article? Notice how you have published so much but none of them are even featured? HP is not a place to write a blog; you should be writing full articles like you would read in a magazine.
      This little piece is no better than lots of little blog posts out there. Unless your article has more substance, it is never going to pass.
      Time to start writing.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 months ago

    There are plenty of grammar errors so I gave up. Also, the first part is about the emancipation of women from the kitchen, and this doesn't relate to the title. It might do later, but I didn't get that far.