Learning Newbie. Score is a 51. Can someone critique my article.

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  1. Charles Philip profile image68
    Charles Philipposted 7 years ago

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  2. theraggededge profile image83
    theraggededgeposted 7 years ago

    Lots of grammatical issues and looks like one big advertisement.

    Spend some time at the Learning Center; click Help at the top right of any page.

    By the way, it's better if you use the link in the email sent to you. It will automatically post a feedback request here. You don't need to paste in an image of the hub.

    Good luck.

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    1. Charles Philip profile image68
      Charles Philipposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      TY

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  3. DrMark1961 profile image99
    DrMark1961posted 7 years ago

    If the first sentence I read was "I been into health improvement for a vary long time" I would be out of there fast. You need people to stay on there and read the article. Follow theraggededge´s suggestion and improve the grammar and spelling.

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    1. Charles Philip profile image68
      Charles Philipposted 7 years ago

      Grammar is my biggest weakest. I'm currently taking courses now to improve it.

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      1. DrMark1961 profile image99
        DrMark1961posted 7 years agoin reply to this

        I learned something from the article, but not enough so that I would want to share it on social media--mostly because of the grammar. I wish you the best of luck with your courses.
        (If you have someone around, like a teacher at the course, maybe you could ask him/her to look at your articles before submission?)

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        1. Charles Philip profile image68
          Charles Philipposted 7 years agoin reply to this

          I fixed the grammar issue and the score went down. I even added a related video, with a certified dietitian.
          I'm actually taking courses. They did say just keep practicing; and the new habits will start to flow effortlessly.

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    2. livetech profile image54
      livetechposted 7 years ago

      looks tasty!

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