I'd like feedback on my article: Valentine's Day - Gifting Ideas

  1. Sanchaita profile image71
    Sanchaitaposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Valentine's Day - Gifting Ideas. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image98
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 months ago

    There are several grammar errors so you should run the text through a free program such as Grammarly.

    The piece is crying out for legal-to-use images. The large blocks of type are a turn-off for readers.

    Also, the article is very thin on information. Giving flowers and setting up a candle-lit dinner are hardly new ideas. HubPages looks for unique, information-rich, magazine-style articles.