Hello all, i would love it if someone could take a look over my first hub and give me some pointers, thanks!
I'm busy but I gave it a quick look over. It is well written but needs more pictures...1 isn't enough to keep a quick scanner's interest in it. The pictures are suppose to encourage you to read the text. A good 3-7 would be great. Also, somehow you need to incorporate some kind of media, a RSS feed or a video or maybe just links to other helpful sites or something. When your approved, you might also want to add an amazon or ebay product to the hub.
Basically= Writings Good, More "FLARE"
Thanks for the pointers! I added some more pictures as suggested, anymore advice would be warmly received.
As for adding some sort of media, I think I had better learn to use my laptop before I start getting ahead of myself!
It's a great hub, you write well.
A couple of things - you 3rd point doesn't make sense, "Ask when you order your drinks how long the waiting time is when you order your drinks."
And there are some slightly odd (0o0) insertions in the text.
Thanks for the feed back, and the comment left!
I write and save all my work on word and copy and paste my work on here the oOo was to show me where I wanted the next capsules to start.
Clearly I didnt proof read as well as I thought!!
Thanks for pointing it out.
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