My newest hub! Is it over-promotional?

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    profilerposted 8 years ago

    What you think of my newest hub? … ero-Online

    Do you think I'm advertising JamLegends too much?

    But I love the game so  much!!!

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    Ghost32posted 8 years ago

    Love your enthusiasm for the game; it's good to see that sort of passion...but yes, I do see it as overly promotional.  If you remove the ad where you are asking the viewer directly to help you out, that would make all the difference.

    In other words, that specific ad left me with the feeling, hey, this skater just wants me to get him referral points, well, air-guitar him!!  Take that out, though, and it comes across as the pure joy and love of the game I truly believe you want to communicate to others.

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    profilerposted 8 years ago

    Ty for your feedback!

    Already removed that section!