New to Hub Pages - Looking for Honest Input on my first Hub Page

  1. kallystehouwer profile image50
    kallystehouwerposted 8 years ago

    Hi... If you've got a moment and wouldn't mind giving your opinion, I just published my first hub page.  Looking for lots of advice from experienced hubbers! (Who knows, hopefully someday I'll be in your spot giving my own advice :-)

    Thanks a million!

    1. dohn121 profile image82
      dohn121posted 8 years agoin reply to this

      I just checked out your hub and think it's fine, just that you should maybe tell your own story to the reader about how you lost weight or how you're able to keep off weight.  It might help smile

  2. Uninvited Writer profile image84
    Uninvited Writerposted 8 years ago

    You will get more help if you post this in the Extreme Hub Makeover forum.