A new poem from a non poet

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    wesleycoxposted 8 years ago

    I have just published a second poem.  I request everyone look at this and tell me in the comments section if it is worthy of my wife's eyes.

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    wesleycoxposted 8 years ago

    Got some positive feedback, thank you everyone.  I have made the changes suggested, come check it out and see if this is any better.

 
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