nikita - as per DS, only post your hubs in the makeover section. I don't know about mean but you should expect constructive criticism, like the following:
The hub itself is fine, in as much as the content is as is should be regarding the topic. However, it needs a little tidying up re grammar and spelling. The piture use is fine but maybe add a news capsule at the bottom and perhaps find an uplifting music video or similar? Insert it somewhere central and make sure it's not too long?
And your url is wayyyyyyyyy too long! You either need to shorten urls full stop, or if it's a hub based around keywords/phrases, they should be the url title.
The best advice I can give is to look around the site. Use the search facility, look closely at the top hubbers and see how they present their hubs and what resources they draw on - pictures, videos etc.