I hope I don't need extreme make-over, but your opinion would help

Jump to Last Post 1-5 of 5 discussions (14 posts)
  1. Appletreedeals profile image73
    Appletreedealsposted 9 years ago

    I hope I'm moving in the right direction with my Amazon hubs. But I would appreciate your opinions if you don't mind looking.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/campfire-recipe … oking?done

    1. emievil profile image74
      emievilposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Wish I can help you on this Appletree but I'm no expert in Amazon hubs (er you might want to remove the link, I don't think that's allowed). Maybe Nelle Hoxie or Mark or the other more experienced hubbers can help you. I'm bumping this post so that some of them can read this. So *bump*. smile

      1. sunforged profile image70
        sunforgedposted 9 years agoin reply to this

        extreme hub makeover= fair game to post links to hubs

        1. emievil profile image74
          emievilposted 9 years agoin reply to this

          oooopppps sorry, didn't know that. haven't tried posting a link in the forum smile.

    2. sunforged profile image70
      sunforgedposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      I grew up in the scout program, my father was District executive of our local council...reading through your hub def brought back lots of memories.

      in my opinion the best dutch cooking recipe ever is pineapple upside downcake, its easily made and is quite an amazing different treat to have while outdoors. I used to use as part of the cooking merit badge lessons.

      The hub is quite in depth and well done, not overboard on products (as in it doesnt look like sales is your main goal, yet their are def plenty of opportunities should they get the urge)

      some small typos
      on quesadilla (under one of the pics)

      2 - ponds cubed beef  (recipe)

      1. Appletreedeals profile image73
        Appletreedealsposted 9 years agoin reply to this

        thanks sunforged, great to hear about your scouting association. I enjoyed scouting as much as my son. my wife always joked I was the one that wanted to go camping more than my son (LOL)
        I've had that pineapple cake in cake, it is a delicious treat.

        fixing the typos and links, thanks for the input.

  2. thranax profile image52
    thranaxposted 9 years ago

    Wow, that hub is basically the cream of the crop when it comes to skillets and cookware!


  3. Lily Rose profile image86
    Lily Roseposted 9 years ago

    I'm no expert, either, and I think your hub is great in terms of information provided, but it's too long.  You may loose people's interest before they get to the bottom.  Maybe you could try and break it up into 2 hubs?

  4. Marisa Wright profile image95
    Marisa Wrightposted 9 years ago

    Lily Rose, some of the flagship Hubs are that long - I think it's probably OK.  The length means there's lots of content and lots of images so it should find favour with Google!

    I personally don't put links to external sites in the body of my Hubs - why do you want someone to exit your Hub by clicking on a link?  They probably won't come back and click on your ads.

    Links to external sites help your page rank, but I follow Darkside's advice and put them all in a links capsule at the very bottom of the Hub, below the comments (where Google will still see them but real people probably won't).

    1. Lily Rose profile image86
      Lily Roseposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Marisa, I guess you're right about that.  It is a very thorough article, but I personally couldn't get through it all because it was so long but I guess that's just me.

      Are you referring to links in MY hubs, or Appletreedeals's?

      I belive I may have one or two hubs that have links in the body to external sites, but the sites are mine (with the exception of my shop for cool stuff hub) and the links open in a new window, so I can only hope that if someone clicks the link, they'll look & read, then close that window and come back.

      Silly thinking, maybe - but I don't make a habit of doing that; I usually do as you said, put all the links in a link capsule at the bottom.

      1. Marisa Wright profile image95
        Marisa Wrightposted 9 years agoin reply to this

        I was talking about Appletree's Hub!  I do think it's naive to expect people to close the new window and go back to your Hub, as internet browsers are so easily distracted.  But if you're linking to your own sites then you may be quite happy for them to stay distracted!

    2. thranax profile image52
      thranaxposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      Sometimes it makes sense to put the external links near the text there about to make the Hub easy to use and to prove to the viewer that it did help. This might score you a return reader/fan/someone who will share it with others. Word of mouth is still 99X quicker then any means of self promotion in the world.

      All the links I put to external sources open in a new tab or window, which means no one ever navigates away anyway unless they take the time to shut it.


    3. Appletreedeals profile image73
      Appletreedealsposted 9 years agoin reply to this

      thanks for the good advice Marissa, I agree completely, hated putting them there, was just following advice

      thanks for taking the time and offering input.

  5. profile image0
    TMinutposted 9 years ago

    You really think most people don't click a link for the extra info or the example mentioned, then go back to finish? I know I do go back, almost always. If I didn't enjoy what I was reading, that's when I don't even click the link.

    I wanted to write a hub or post about how I surf the net but from what I read others writing, my ways are not the norm - so I guess it wouldn't really help anyone. Still would like to read others' online habits though.


This website uses cookies

As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, hubpages.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at: https://hubpages.com/privacy-policy#gdpr

Show Details
HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the googleapis.com or gstatic.com domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)