Bunch of Rewrites

  1. Randolph Goldberg profile image55
    Randolph Goldbergposted 8 years ago
  2. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 8 years ago

    Hello RG smile welcome to HubPages. You have great subject that is also highly competitive wink but of great interest to people. I would inject a touch of humor here and there, your pic may not show up as it's a little small. I been having probs with some of mine too tongue lol. Your presentation is good and content laid out well but your tags may need focus as not everybody will know a chapter 13 wink try to figure out questions that people will ask themselves in a search unless you are directing towards other bankers, financial advisers? also, yes, use industry tags such as 2 just mentioned. Otherwise, they look great and you're doing fabulous! big_smile