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  1. Cagsil profile image82
    Cagsilposted 8 years ago

    Hey Hubbers,

    I could use some feedback on a Hub I just published. I've tried to make it presentable as much as possible, especially since I'm really not trying to sell anything at all.

    Again, for those who know me, I'm simply passing along knowledge I've learned to others.

    Again, I'm not asking your advice on whether or not, what's on the Hub is accurate, because I already know for a fact it is right. I'm looking for any errors(typos), which I might have missed and people's overall view.

    I will greatly appreciate any input anyone wants or feels willing to share.

    Thank you for your time.

    Here is the link- http://hubpages.com/hub/Is-Your-Problem … -Knowledge

    1. lorlie6 profile image83
      lorlie6posted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Will do...be back soon.

  2. lorlie6 profile image83
    lorlie6posted 8 years ago

    Okay, my friend, I left you a comment you may not find to your liking, but as I indicated, I was a philosophy minor and my professor's approach was to lovingly present each theory-from Plato to Kierkegaard or Sartre-and then mercilessly find fault with each.  So what is there in the end? 
    A vision quite like yours, although I'm not sure I'd call it an exercise in moral absolutes.
    Love Ya, though!!! yikes

    1. Cagsil profile image82
      Cagsilposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you kindly lorlie. I've responded your to you comment. Again, my Hub stated, I'm in a position where the facts don't lie and understanding is always subjective by people's own perceptions. I can understand you've got a minor background in philosophy, but my knowledge encompasses ALL science fields, including psychological information accumulated by tons and tons of research.

      Again, I am very appreciative of your effort put forth.

      1. lorlie6 profile image83
        lorlie6posted 8 years agoin reply to this

        That's awesome...and I respect your knowledge.  Maybe all of my years have put a spin on my perceptions.

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    lyricsingrayposted 8 years ago

    I think it was a great hub and one that could help many if they are able to stop for a second.  I am one that needed that reality check today and thank you for opening my mind more today as I never want to stop learning

    ps- one of your photos has not saved or published - glitch's - gotta love them

    Thanks Cagsil

    1. Cagsil profile image82
      Cagsilposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you Lyricsingray. I'm very glad you got something from it. lol lol big_smile lol lol

      As for the photo...it's a glitch of Hubpages. I went and checked after I read your post, and each was working fine.

      And, Welcome back. big_smile Nice to see you again.

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        lyricsingrayposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        Thanks Cagsil very nice of you - glad to see your hubbing again - i will too today - finally lol

  4. tantrum profile image59
    tantrumposted 8 years ago

    Hi cagsil !!
    My Master ! big_smile

    1. Cagsil profile image82
      Cagsilposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Tantrum,

      Nice to see you are making your rounds. lol

      I'm not anyone's master, except for myself. big_smile

      1. tantrum profile image59
        tantrumposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        sad Oh !

        And I thinking, 'here's a mentor for me ' big_smile

        lol

        1. Cagsil profile image82
          Cagsilposted 8 years agoin reply to this

          big_smile

  5. cally2 profile image60
    cally2posted 8 years ago

    Your knowledge encompasses ALL science fields? That's just a tad arrogant for my liking. To probably misquote an old saying the acknowledgement of one's own ignorance is the first step to wisdom.

    1. Cagsil profile image82
      Cagsilposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      I acknowledge that I am ignorant in some areas of Life, but not the important parts. Sure, there is alot of different areas of science(but you have to realize to understand that science is about learning factual truths and exploring reality as we see it).

      Yes, I admit, there will be some stuff I don't know, therefore I don't claim to be a know-it-all, as it appears. But, there is no way for any single person to have all knowledge of everything, because our individual brain capacity isn't limitless, just our wisdom is.

      1. cally2 profile image60
        cally2posted 8 years agoin reply to this

        OK. Maybe I'm just being picky. My brain is still swirling with your hub. That must be a good thing so early in the morning (for me)

  6. Cagsil profile image82
    Cagsilposted 8 years ago

    Anyone else?

  7. Cagsil profile image82
    Cagsilposted 8 years ago

    Well, Thank you all for your thoughts. I'm grateful you took time to check out my hub.

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    lyricsingrayposted 8 years ago

    Cagsil, great job, just wanted to tell you again- also bring this forum back up so those who missed it can read your Hub.  Thanks  big_smile

  9. Temujinkhan profile image60
    Temujinkhanposted 8 years ago

    I would really like some feed back on my newest hub http://hubpages.com/hub/Diabetic-cook-book I personally think its my best so far but I still want to improve my hubs. So any advice hint or tips will be greatly appreciated.

    Many thanks in advance

  10. Marisa Wright profile image98
    Marisa Wrightposted 8 years ago

    Cagsil, I'll address the structure of the Hub rather than the content.  I have to do that because, to be honest, you lost my interest in the first paragraph.  It rambles too much and doesn't pique my curiosity enough to be bothered to read on.

    Most of your paragraphs are too long, and that's one thing that contributes to the "indigestible" look.  I've noticed that because of the width of a Hub (especially if there are ads or pics to the right), normal-length paragraphs are often too large for HubPages.

    Have you thought of using highlighted text boxes to draw attention to specific points?  For instance, you ask people to do an exercise in the first para - why not put the exercise in a highlighted text box?

    Oh, and Temu - please don't hijack someone else's thread, post your own thread.

  11. Temujinkhan profile image60
    Temujinkhanposted 8 years ago

    Sorry my mistake I thought that was how to do it post in a thread already made (not hi-jack).

    Will post a thread of my own. Thank you

 
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