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New Hub. Feedback?

  1. Randolph Goldberg profile image56
    Randolph Goldbergposted 7 years ago

    I wrote this hub after reading about several stories about sleezy attorneys giving the industry a bad name. Anyone got any feedback?
    http://hubpages.com/hub/How-to-Avoid-Hi … tcy-Lawyer

  2. lrohner profile image83
    lrohnerposted 7 years ago

    It's aesthetically pleasing and gives good information. Just work on getting more relevant tags and run it through a spell/grammar checker first. But good work!

  3. frogdropping profile image85
    frogdroppingposted 7 years ago

    As per lrohner. I scanned rather than read but so far, so good.

    And welcome to HubPages smile

  4. Randolph Goldberg profile image56
    Randolph Goldbergposted 7 years ago

    Was the spelling/grammar that bad? I typed it up is MSWord before I posted it.

  5. frogdropping profile image85
    frogdroppingposted 7 years ago

    You've missed an odd 'a' (etc) here and there. A good tip: read your written work out aloud. Don't read in your mind. You're far more likely to spot the mistakes that way smile

    And don't despair - it really isn't that bad, honest!

  6. IzzyM profile image87
    IzzyMposted 7 years ago

    Randolf I liked your hub. It was well laid out, easy to read and informative. Well done!

  7. Randolph Goldberg profile image56
    Randolph Goldbergposted 7 years ago

    Thank you

  8. Marisa Wright profile image95
    Marisa Wrightposted 7 years ago

    I agree on the proof reading. You have several mistakes a spell checker won't pick (although a grammar checker should) - things like "they" where it should be "the".

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