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Friends you need to tell me ,What can be improved?

  1. kcnck profile image61
    kcnckposted 8 years ago

    My hub is http://hubpages.com/hub/Benefits-of-oil-for-hair
    I neeed to know where I went wrong and what I did well.
    also,I have not seen an area to post this request.If I have posted in wrong area please correct me.

    Also I have seen that my lens was viewed by several people in this forum in 3 hours.How did they come to know?

    1. kcnck profile image61
      kcnckposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Any help?

      1. bat115 profile image81
        bat115posted 8 years agoin reply to this

        I don't see any problems myself! As someone who has bad hair problems I'm interested in learning all I can. I am working on a few hair hubs as well.

  2. lrohner profile image82
    lrohnerposted 8 years ago

    I think you need a lot more explanation in there. You just right into stuff and I don't even know what you're talking about. And you should really run it through a spell/grammar checker. You've got lots of punctuation and grammar errors.

  3. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 8 years ago

    Welcome to HubPages, smile I would suggest moving first pictures off to the side so not to interrupt the flow of text. More content in more text capsules allows for extra adverts, just some thoughts big_smile