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Is small good or do you have an opinion ?

  1. kcnck profile image61
    kcnckposted 8 years ago

    I'm new here. I made  a mini hub on benefits of oiling hair . Can you please go through my hub 
    and tell me what you think about it?

    I feel once you have put your point across, you have done your job.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Benefits-of-oil-for-hair

  2. Uninvited Writer profile image83
    Uninvited Writerposted 8 years ago

    An introductory paragraph followed by the list would be better. Some may be repetitive but people don't want to be thrown right into a list. Also, a longer summation would be a good idea also.

  3. habee profile image94
    habeeposted 8 years ago

    I agree with UW. As a former writing/lit teacher, I definitely think you need an introduction. "Lead" you readers to your lists.

  4. TINA V profile image78
    TINA Vposted 8 years ago

    I will try to check it out later.  I will post my comments in your hubs.

    Have a great week!

  5. kcnck profile image61
    kcnckposted 8 years ago

    Thanks U W for commenting . A intro and summary will be put.

    Thanks HABEE for commenting. I will definitely put a intro .

    TINA, you are welcome.Wish you a Happy and Happening week too.

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    zampanoposted 8 years ago

    Come on.
    $200 a year for a horse you love, is not much.
    People spend thousands a year for nasty doggies...

 
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