I'm new here. I made a mini hub on benefits of oiling hair . Can you please go through my hub
and tell me what you think about it?
I feel once you have put your point across, you have done your job.
An introductory paragraph followed by the list would be better. Some may be repetitive but people don't want to be thrown right into a list. Also, a longer summation would be a good idea also.
I agree with UW. As a former writing/lit teacher, I definitely think you need an introduction. "Lead" you readers to your lists.
I will try to check it out later. I will post my comments in your hubs.
Have a great week!
Thanks U W for commenting . A intro and summary will be put.
Thanks HABEE for commenting. I will definitely put a intro .
TINA, you are welcome.Wish you a Happy and Happening week too.
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