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   Crazdwriterposted 15 years ago

   Hey guys I just wrote a new hub on hair cloring and giving tips. One tip I want ppl to comment most about and tell me if it's all right that I had worded it that way and that is the third tip. Please read it and let me know it's okay. I don't want it to sound too raunchie since that is so not me!
   
   Thanks guys!
   
   Don't remember if it's okay that I post it here but here is the link for the hub I'm asking help on
   
   http://hubpages.com/hub/Tips-For-Coloring-Your-Hair

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      motricioposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      No it's not ok,
      You can be banned for prommoting your hubs!

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         Crazdwriterposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         Ugh dude did you see where I put it? I put in Extreme Hub Makeover! You can do that in here when you want help on a hub.

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            motricioposted 15 years agoin reply to this

            Guess all rules have exceptions.

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               Cagsilposted 15 years agoin reply to this

               You guess all rules have exceptions? That makes no sense, considering the RULES are that you can only post in Extreme Makeover links to your Hubs.
               
               It's not the exception to the rule, it is the rule. There is another rule that you cannot promote your own Hubs for self promotion in the rest of the forums. In Extreme Makeover its not self promotion, but critiquing tips and advice.
               
               Hope I helped clear that up.

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         shazwellynposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         I think it is ok on extreme hub makeover x

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         cosetteposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         actually she posted it in the right forum.
         
         i see people posting their hubs, or links to their buddies' hubs, all over the place and no one says anything about them. i avoid those just on principle.
         
         blechh. :x

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   Mike Rogersposted 15 years ago

   Crazdwriter,
   
   Reads just fine to me.
   
   Mike

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      Crazdwriterposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Phew thanks Mike.

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   Smooth as Silkposted 15 years ago

   It looks great to me!

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   Crazdwriterposted 15 years ago

   okay so that tip doesn't sound too rounchie at all? it sounds okay the way I worded it?

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      Smooth as Silkposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      If doing that is raunchy, then I must be disgusting!  I'm always running around the condo half naked.  There is nothing wrong with that.  Hell it's pretty damn convient most of the time. 

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         Crazdwriterposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         lol sweet so I'm not the only one who does that

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            Smooth as Silkposted 15 years agoin reply to this

            I feel completely comfortable being naked, shit I make my living being naked.  So It's all good with me.  Everytime I have to go out somewhere I'm always questioning my outfits too.  You're fine! 

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   motricioposted 15 years ago

   Is ok,
   Would like to have some tips to get away dandruff.

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      Crazdwriterposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      want me to make a hub I have some tips for it or I can tell you in here

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         motricioposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         As you may like! , usually guys don't say a word about that, but I need to dress formal and I like so much black.

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            Crazdwriterposted 15 years agoin reply to this

            well that would be a short short hub so i'll just give you the tip here. the best way is to wash your hair twice with head and shoulders. not just once...but yes twice. And to do it more often than not. plus condioner is a must! and as my mom always said it will get worse before it gets better. so don't freak if dandruff comes up more...I know i have it too

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               motricioposted 15 years agoin reply to this

               :S Weather is too much cold and if I do that I get static X hear!

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                  Crazdwriterposted 15 years agoin reply to this

                  oh...well that is why they have condioner to help get rid of static as well as nourish your hair. that is the only way to help the dandruff problem

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      atilposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Head and Shoulders 

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         motricioposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         That's really B**S**. Doesn't work

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            atilposted 15 years agoin reply to this

            Maybe it isn't dandruff!

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   Crazdwriterposted 15 years ago

   Thanks SaS I feel better now for posting something like that on there.  I just don't want readers going OMG she said nude!

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      Smooth as Silkposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Anyone that gets offended by you saying 'nude', needs to be offended.

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         Crazdwriterposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         lol or rudely awakened by more words like that

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   motricioposted 15 years ago

   Ok I'll try 2ble H&Sh

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      Crazdwriterposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      and conditioner seperate conditioner don't get the 2 in 1 those never work!

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   motricioposted 15 years ago

   Nude girl?
   Where Where???

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      Smooth as Silkposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Come to LA and I'll dance for you!

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         Crazdwriterposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         Hey we're neighbors

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            Smooth as Silkposted 15 years agoin reply to this

            Yeah, where are you at?

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               Crazdwriterposted 15 years agoin reply to this

               For now living in Anaheim...hubby and I will hopfeully be moving to Oceanside in a few months

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         motricioposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         Too far away honey, tooooooooooo

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            Smooth as Silkposted 15 years agoin reply to this

            Sorry baby

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   docrehabposted 15 years ago

   Looks ok to me!

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      Crazdwriterposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      thanks docrehab appreciate it!

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    motricioposted 15 years ago

    And by the way!
    Welcome to hubpages sexy Silk!

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       Smooth as Silkposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       Thanks baby!

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          motricioposted 15 years agoin reply to this

          Hopping to read ur 1st hub.

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