You have a real knack with words, I like your writing. But I don't understand what you're asking, if these are okay or what should you do? If you're asking for a review, I'd say they're good, but I don't have more than that to offer you. <3
Thank you Sandy.
This is the first time I have put any fiction writing up anywhere. If it is aweful I want to know, or how I can improve it. Thank you for reading it.
by Mary McShane3 years ago
The discussion forum "Fiction Writers - Please Introduce Yourselves" (located at http://hubpages.com/forum/topic/91914 started by Website Examiner) is almost two years old. Website Examiner is no longer...
by Ponx7 years ago
Hi everyone, I joined HubPages 2 weeks back and I have been trying to write at least 2 hubs per week (even with my job at hand)....I feel that the HubPages members are very helpful and are more than eager to help out...
by Mary Green4 weeks ago
Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article What Are Superfoods?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!Oh by the way...My Hub was featured until I...
by Jason M Quinapondan2 days ago
Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article What Benefits Could You Get from Writing?. What can I do to improve? Thanks!
by Don Bobbitt2 years ago
I don't know, maybe this is just a disgruntled Rant by myself, alone.I call myself a Writer. By default, this makes me a Reader.And, as someone who has the arrogance to think I am good enough to call myself a writer and...
by Sheila Brown4 years ago
Ok, here goes. I rarely get involved in the forums, I guess I am a little on the shy side. I have been here almost 2 years now and have published over 80 hubs. I have only had 2 ever unfeatured and have...
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