validation? criticism? encouragement?

  1. double_frick profile image62
    double_frickposted 7 years ago

    i've written three hubs so far. they are okay, but i know there is room for improvement. i've already gotten some really good constructive criticism from a friend, so i know there is more to be had!
    anyone have the time to read over my few hubs and give me some input on what they are missing...habits i have that i should/could kick? help! smile
    and thanks so much!
    http://hubpages.com/hub/How-coconut-oil … ove-it-too
    http://hubpages.com/hub/Why-I-Baby-My-B … oconut-Oil
    http://hubpages.com/hub/Use-Coconut-Oil … eight-Loss

    1. goldenpath profile image74
      goldenpathposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Coconut Oil
      No video link came up so I don't know what's on it.  Perhaps a couple more regular page links to reputable sources would be good.  Also, more testimonials.  Other than that not a bad hub!

 
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