I'd like feedback on my article: Kulthi - Horse Gram - Nutrition Facts, Health..

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  1. rajan jolly profile image94
    rajan jollyposted 13 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Kulthi - Horse Gram - Nutrition Facts, Health Benefits and Uses. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. manatita44 profile image84
      manatita44posted 13 months agoin reply to this

      From 'Amino acids and Fatty acids' and again 'Health Issues in which Horse gram is Used', I think you can do with a couple of capsules. Seems just too much writing to read until the end. add some photos

      1. rajan jolly profile image94
        rajan jollyposted 12 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks for your suggestions manatita.

  2. aesta1 profile image87
    aesta1posted 13 months ago

    Hi Rajan,
    You have interesting information in this hub but they are series of notes you have gathered. Now, you need to frame your information for better readability. You can have graphs of some of the info you have and put the information together into a coherent display.

    This is just the impression I was getting after going through it.

    1. rajan jolly profile image94
      rajan jollyposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your observations aesta. I will see how best I can try them.

  3. DrMark1961 profile image96
    DrMark1961posted 13 months ago

    Hi Rajan I have learned a lot by reading some of your articles over the years but I have to aesta1 per her comment about readability. When I read this hub, I felt that it was not a lot better (or a better use of my time) than just reading a wikipedia post. The article on horse gram on sadhguru´s site is a lot more readable and the kind of information that I would be looking for.
    What about focusing the article on Ayurvedic uses of horse gram? The information is already there but you would need to organize it a little differently.
    Will that keep it from passing QAP? No, I do not think so. You do need to run your subtitles through the title capitalization tool to make sure they are all following APA guidelines.

    1. rajan jolly profile image94
      rajan jollyposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Dr Mark thank you for these suggestions. Will try to work through them as best as I can.

  4. Marketing Merit profile image96
    Marketing Meritposted 12 months ago

    In addition to the comments above, especially regarding readability, I personally felt that the term 'horse gram' was over-used and may be viewed as keyword stuffing. I appreciate that it is not always easy to find alternatives, but you should consider replacing this term with different expressions.

    1. rajan jolly profile image94
      rajan jollyposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you Marketing Merit. Will check this out and yes there are a few alternatives I can use.


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