I'd like feedback on my article: How can you understand your dream man well?

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  1. shrutisengupta profile image60
    shrutisenguptaposted 7 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article How can you understand your dream man well? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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  2. Gregory DeVictor profile image76
    Gregory DeVictorposted 7 years ago

    First, all of the words in your title must be capitalized.

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    1. shrutisengupta profile image60
      shrutisenguptaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks Gregory... Can you please suggest any more changes?

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      1. theraggededge profile image77
        theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        I think you should add a proper introduction. Explain to your readers what the article is about. For instance, I thought it might have been about a literal dream man. So a paragraph beginning with your existing first sentence and then instead of launching into 'instructions', tell us what we are going to read and why we should keep reading...

        "Congratulations! You have succeeded in finding your dream man. Now you need to keep him. And the key to holding on to him and keeping his interest is by understanding him...."

        That's just an example, but I'm sure you get the idea. Remember that the introduction is the first thing the editors read, and it also your chance to grab your reader's attention.

        Keep paragraphs short. Use bullet points. Don't use too much bold text and exclamation points. Neither are necessary in a well-written article. Capitalise your title and subtitles properly.

        You cannot take images from other websites. Never ever. Use Creative Commons licensed photos from places like Pixabay.

        Good luck.

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        1. shrutisengupta profile image60
          shrutisenguptaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

          Thank you so much dear.... That was a great help

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  3. Rupert Taylor profile image83
    Rupert Taylorposted 7 years ago

    There are quite a few minor grammar problems. I suggest running your text through a free program such as Hemingway or Grammarly to catch them.

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    1. shrutisengupta profile image60
      shrutisenguptaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks Rupert

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