I'd like feedback on my article: Avoid Job Boredom

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   Maria Ceciliaposted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Avoid Job Boredom. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      Maria Ceciliaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Hubpages called my attention to.improve this but i think
      what i did may not be enough... I am asking fot your help and tips on what to do

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   chasmacposted 7 years ago

   Change your title to reflect that this Hub is about avoiding job boredom for office workers. The majority of people don't work in offices.
   
   Replace the boldface font in your text with normal style.
   
   Fix the grammar and style errors, and use articles (the, a, an) appropriately.
   
   The subtitle: "Why Job Boredom Occurs" is not a question so remove the question mark.
   
   Remove/ replace photos that are out of focus. Also HP doesn't like time/date-stamped photos.

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      Maria Ceciliaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      thank you so much what you said or all the tips you said are so new to me. i will add this to what I have learned psting in this topic

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         Titiaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Don't know what your dog photos have to do with being bored on the job. Remove them. All titles and subtitles have to be capitalized in the proper way. I use this program to capitalize my titles.

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            Maria Ceciliaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

            because I was talking about personal inspirations so in my case I post my dogs photos aside from my family. it was like providing for love ones, because we love them so much,  is one of our inspirations why work efficiently and diligently... so I will need change that too..

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               Maria Ceciliaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

               thanks so much i will think of the better way to express the personal inspiration part

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   aesta1posted 7 years ago

   Chasmac has pointed out useful suggestions for improving your article. Edit your article several times making sure that what you say in your paragraph reflects the sub-title and the sub-title further tightens your main title. You can use Grammarly to check your grammar but you need to refine your paragraphs. Take new pictures as the ones you have are not very attractive so adds very little to enhance your article. You can do it.

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   Maria Ceciliaposted 7 years ago

   Thank you so much, I guess editing using my smartphone wont help. ok at least I have an idea of what to do with my article...I am going to list all the tips that i got from here ad That will be my reference for my future article.. I shiuld have done this before.....thanks again

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