I would appreciate your feedback on improving an article

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  1. Ioana-R profile image84
    Ioana-Rposted 7 years ago

    Hello Hubbers,

    I'd very much appreciate your help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Quiz: Build the Ideal Library and We Tell You How Old You Really Are! What can I do to improve it?

    Thanks!
    Alexa

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    1. Mike Hardy profile image41
      Mike Hardyposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Question three is extremely limiting. I have 100's of books but not of any that you mention. Always offer a way to the next question.

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  2. Rupert Taylor profile image82
    Rupert Taylorposted 7 years ago

    A few things occur to me.

    Your headline is not going to attract readers from search engines. I can't imagine anybody is going to type that string of characters into a search field.

    It's not really an article. HubPages looks for magazine-style, content-rich, informative, and unique articles. This doesn't really check any of those boxes.

    There are grammar errors.

    "They are arranged alphabetically or based on gender ..." Isn't genre a better word?

    "You would never invest much in a fancy library furniture ..." the indefinite article should not be there.

    And, do you have permission to use the images?

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    1. Ioana-R profile image84
      Ioana-Rposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for your advice! I changed the title, I checked for errors.
      I really looked for the "gender/genre" mistake and it wasn't there. I wrote genre from the start. Maybe you are right and it slipped past my vigilance smile

      The images are from a public domain and I cited their sources.
      It's still not featured. Maybe quizzes are not really my thing, I don't know....

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  3. Gregory DeVictor profile image77
    Gregory DeVictorposted 7 years ago

    Alexa, I recommend that you reread what Rupert Taylor said above about your hub really not being an article. Your article must contain useful content that could potentially solve a problem or two for somebody. This is what HP is looking for and I don't see your hub achieving that goal.

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