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I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article What is micro sleep and how it could be deadly (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
I found your article to be very informative. Probably because I have experienced micro-sleep while driving.
I did not see any errors. Are your photos attributed?
I never knew about micro-sleep until today. Still, I can find more informative articles on the internet. You can do better. Good article, though.
This was a boring article and I know that you can do a lot better. I could learn about as much going to Wikipedia, which is not a compliment.
When writing on the internet, you have a few lines to grab someones attention. If you do not, they are just going to bounce off and read another article. Your ads will never have time to load, your impressions will suffer, and you will never make much money for all of your efforts.
Readers are not going to care much about someone in your family that had a microsleep incident. What they are going to care about is how this can affect them, and what they can do to stop it.
I would change the title. How about "How to keep from falling asleep during your exams?" Whatever. Work on it.
Start out by asking the reader if he or she has ever fallen asleep during a test. How about driving all night?
After grabbing the readers attention, list some methods they can use to avoid this in the future. Your list is great, just down where the reader will probably never reach it.
Do those references lead to high quality sites that add to the readers knowledge base? Is your article any better than those, or is it just a rehash?
There is a lot of work to do on this but if you care about the subject it will be worth it.
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