Need feedback on my article

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   Chantelle Porterposted 7 years ago

   I have an article that I’d like feedback on. It was originally featured on Hubpages 2 years ago. I then moved it to my blog. Now that I’ve started earning here on Hubpges I moved it back and it is not featured. “What not to say to the parents of a special need child". Any help is appreciated.

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      peachpurpleposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Your hub is very detailed but you need to put more spacing before you add in the picture. Look very crammed.

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   Chantelle Porterposted 7 years ago

   https://hubpages.com/health/What-Not-To … eeds-Child   This is the link.

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      Polly Cposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Hi, your article isn't published so no one can see it, you'll need to publish it again.

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         Chantelle Porterposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Ok, it’s published

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   DrMark1961posted 7 years ago

   The Amazon capsule is considered spammy. The book may be related to the subject, but why should I buy it? If it is something you have read, and it helped you deal with people that said stupid things to you about your sons autism, point that out. If not, remove it.
   There are numerous grammatical errors. taking that to mean that you think my child should have never been born? Why does that sentence start that way? Is it missing a word, or just a capital letter? I saw the same thing under your section about being happy.
   A few of the photos of your son are blurry. If you do not have others of higher quality, they should be removed.
   You make some good points here. I think it will be featured soon.

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   Polly Cposted 7 years ago

   Yes, I agree with DrMark - you can obviously write well but many of your paragraphs start in a strange way, like 'positive', a one-word sentence with no capital letter, or 'daughter of friends from college' which doesn't make any grammatical sense.
   
   I think the article would be better if you offered more of an introduction, as at the moment it just jumps in at the first example. I would like to know within the article a bit more about you and your son, and perhaps a little bit of an introduction to the general topic. Not a lot, just a bit, to make it begin less abruptly.

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      Polly Cposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      But apart from that, I do think it is a good article and offers an important insight into the thoughtless comments some parents have to endure!

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   Chantelle Porterposted 7 years ago

   Thanks for the input. I’m going to start working on it right now!

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