I'd like feedback on my article: Difference Between Asteroids and Comets

1. 99

   Babu Mohanposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Difference Between Asteroids and Comets

   replyreport
2. 98

   DrMark1961posted 6 years ago

   As part of your editing, I suggest that you remove the comment about this "lens". Things have chaged, squidoo no longer exists, and this is not a lens.
   Also, those Amazon links are not related and look very spammy. If you add a link it should be to something that is directly related to the title and subject of your article, and not just something that might help you look at comets, like a pair of binoculars. (do you use them, do you have personal experience with them, etc.)
   Titles and subtitles need to follow the APA rules. https://capitalizemytitle.com
   The comment about a photo credit has nothing to do with the paragraph. Why is it there?
   Even after you fix these problems, I am not sure how well your article is going to do. Are you even getting any traffic? I doubt it. There are plenty of other sources for the same material out there.
   If you are interested in participating here, and want to see some traffic and income, you need to write something original.

   replyreport
   1. 99

      Babu Mohanposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I appreciate your candid feedback. Will start working on the same. Thanks DrMark1961.

      replyreport
   2. 38

      brave12posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      my article not published, can u refine my article?

      replyreport
      1. 98

         DrMark1961posted 6 years agoin reply to this

         If you mean take a look at it, that would be possible but you need to make your own thread, post a link to your article so that others can see it. Check and see if you have an email from Hubpages.

         replyreport
         1. 38

            brave12posted 6 years agoin reply to this

            my article not published so I haven't link to the article, I have an email from Hubpages.

            replyreport
            1. 65

               psycheskinnerposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               When it failed quality assessment you were sent an email--find it and follow the instructions.

               replyreport
               1. 38

                  brave12posted 6 years agoin reply to this

                  can you correct my mistakes?
                  
                  i don't know how to correct

                  replyreport
         2. 38

            brave12posted 6 years agoin reply to this

            can you correct my mistakes?

            replyreport
            1. 98

               DrMark1961posted 6 years agoin reply to this

               No. If you do not learn to correct your own mistakes you will not succeed.

               replyreport
   3. 99

      Babu Mohanposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks again. Hubpages seems to have a simple and straight forward way for evaluating articles. There seems to be no complex algorithms like Squidoo that does not allow one to write freely. Your feedback helped a lot.

      replyreport
      1. 98

         DrMark1961posted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Glad I could help. I am looking forward to reading your next article.

         replyreport