I'd like feedback on my article: Huanted horror night

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  1. Prasanna975 profile image59
    Prasanna975posted 5 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Huanted horror night (must be signed in to view)

    1. CYong74 profile image95
      CYong74posted 5 months agoin reply to this

      There is a typo in the first word of your title?!

      1. Will Apse profile image91
        Will Apseposted 5 months agoin reply to this

        Let's not get too picky, this is HP.

  2. AliciaC profile image98
    AliciaCposted 5 months ago

    Hi. I'm sorry to say this, but your knowledge of English is not yet at the standard required in order to write for HubPages. There are language errors throughout your story. I suggest that you work on your English skills and then try creating an article again in the future.

  3. FatFreddysCat profile image98
    FatFreddysCatposted 5 months ago

    Sorry dude, but if you can't even spell "Haunted" right in your title, no one is going to bother reading the rest.

  4. Prasanna975 profile image59
    Prasanna975posted 5 months ago

    Haunted means 'dwelling devil '.. I'm sorry to say dude. I think dude you should improve yours vocabulary skill.. Thankyou

    1. FatFreddysCat profile image98
      FatFreddysCatposted 5 months agoin reply to this

      The irony in the above post is so thick you can cut it with a knife...dude.

  5. Prasanna975 profile image59
    Prasanna975posted 5 months ago

    Its better for me.. Thanks for your advice

  6. DrMark1961 profile image98
    DrMark1961posted 5 months ago

    People are trying to help you here. Check the first word in your title. It is incorrect and if anyone does find your article on search they are not going to click on it because of the promise of more bad spelling to come.
    The first sentence should be deleted too. It is clumsy, does not add to your article, but does encourage a potential reader to look elswhere.

 
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