I'd like feedback on my article: Muslims love for Muhammad (PBUH)

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  1. itsTalha profile image66
    itsTalhaposted 6 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Muslims love for Muhammad (PBUH) (must be signed in to view)

    1. theraggededge profile image83
      theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      I'm afraid your English is not quite up to the standard HubPages requires.

      Also, you can't earn properly here because HubPages only pays via PayPal and it is not available in Pakistan. You would have to use Adsense only.

  2. itsTalha profile image66
    itsTalhaposted 6 years ago

    You are right but my relatives live in Dubai So I'll contact with my uncle he will create payPal for me. And if you find any type of mistake then you should help me because its my first article.

    1. theraggededge profile image83
      theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Should I?

      Use the free Grammarly app to help you find errors. If you want to be a writer, you have to be prepared to find and correct your mistakes. We are not here to fix it for you.

      1. lobobrandon profile image65
        lobobrandonposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        I'm pretty sure this guy didn't use the word "should" the way it is intended to be used. I'd suggest you use Grammarly as a first step too.

      2. itsTalha profile image66
        itsTalhaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Do you really think I need your help to improvement of my English? Dear ,there are many ways to improve English I just asked for help to improve my article quality

        1. Marketing Merit profile image64
          Marketing Meritposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          Ok, I have corrected the following for you:

          "Do you really think I need your help to improve my English? There are many ways to improve English language skills. I just asked for help to improve the quality of my article."

          Nobody is going to proofread and correct your article for you. You will begin to improve the quality of your article, by correcting the grammatical errors that exist. This is why TheRaggedEdge has suggested you run your article through Grammarly, as a first step.

          There are a number of other issues, but you need to address this first.

        2. lobobrandon profile image65
          lobobrandonposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          Dear, your article is not an article unless it can be read. So there is no "article quality" to improve, yet. As Marketing Merit pointed out, other issues exist but they can't be treated without first improving the language used.

          1. CYong74 profile image62
            CYong74posted 6 years agoin reply to this

            theraggededge, you're a saint for putting yourself through this.

  3. itsTalha profile image66
    itsTalhaposted 6 years ago

    Got it. Thanks

 
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