I'd like feedback on my article: Texture & Winslow Homer Art Lesson for Early...

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  1. iijuan12 profile image84
    iijuan12posted 6 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve it? Thank you!
    Here is my article: Texture & Winslow Homer Art Lesson for Early Elementary

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    1. Brownie83 profile image100
      Brownie83posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I think it’s a well written article that many teachers could incorporate in their lesson plans. Being a visual learner, I would like to see more step by step photos in the numbered instructions. Also, how do you get these small children to follow such strict instructions? Lol, my 4 year old would definitely do the opposite of what I’d ask, but regardless, I think all art is beautiful. Good hub, but I encourage more photos.

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      1. iijuan12 profile image84
        iijuan12posted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Thank you for your feedback! Do you think the reason my page isn't featured is due to me not having enough photos? Since I teaching the class, it kind of limits how many photos I can take. smile  I'll try to keep that in mind and see if I can work on taking more photos in the future. To answer your question about the instructions, I model the steps for them. Not everyone follows the directions exactly, though most of them do. Each project is their own masterpiece, and as you can see from the photos, they each have their own character.

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        1. Brownie83 profile image100
          Brownie83posted 6 years agoin reply to this

          You could always do photos before or after class. Also, I think your title really narrows the audience. Something like “How to Teach Children to Paint Like Picasso” is more intriguing. (I know this wasn’t the painter you used, but as an example). Just a thought. I honestly don’t know what or who decides an article to be featured or not.

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          1. iijuan12 profile image84
            iijuan12posted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Thank you for those ideas! I appreciate your input!

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          2. iijuan12 profile image84
            iijuan12posted 6 years agoin reply to this

            I think adding the "How to" to the title is a great idea! I just changed it and will do that going forward.

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