I'd like feedback on my article: 9 Ways You Can Be Happy at Work

  1. Naruphon profile image60
    Naruphonposted 7 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: 9 Ways You Can Be Happy at Work

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image97
    Rupert Taylorposted 7 weeks ago

    The quality of your English is not up to the standard required by HubPages. They are many grammar errors and sentences that don't make any sense.

    Images must be free of copyright restrictions; you can't just lift pictures from websites and post them without permission.

    The Amazon capsule would have to be deleted. It has no connection to the content of your article.

    The Learning Center - click on Help at the top right - is packed with information about how to succeed on HubPages.

  3. DrMark1961 profile image98
    DrMark1961posted 7 weeks ago

    In order for this hub to pass the quality process it will need to be edited line by line. There are many more English mistakes here than we can deal with here. If you have an English teacher or a native English speaker living close to you they may be willing to look at it for you. Your written English is good but there are too many obvious mistakes.
    Even after you fix the English, you need to take note of RupertĀ“s comments on the images. Images need to be original or at the very least from a source that allows them to be used by others (creative commons, commercial use permitted).
    Also notice his Amazon comment. That alone is enough to cause the hub to fail QAP.
    The final issue is very serious. The topic of your article is not original and even if it passes and is featured by HP it is unlikely to have any traffic. Unless you can think of interesting and original things to write you are not going to do well here. (Since you mention you are in Thailand maybe you can focus on things there. Tourist attractions? Travel locations? Interesting historical features? If ou do not want to write about Thailand, how about your job. Do you have any interesting skills that others want to read about? If you work at a McDonalds, others on the internet want to know how to make things. Starbucks, Thai food, etc.)
    Do some reading on HPs help area before putting up your next article.
    Best of luck.


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