I'd like feedback on my article: High cholesterol symptoms&causes

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  1. Janet Katsarova profile image52
    Janet Katsarovaposted 6 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: High cholesterol symptoms&causes (must be signed in to view)

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    RTalloniposted 6 years ago

    Check on the titles. Their form needs correcting and make sure their content matches them.

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  3. Rupert Taylor profile image76
    Rupert Taylorposted 6 years ago

    Your title is "High cholesterol symptoms&causes" This is how it should be written High Cholesterol Symptoms and Causes." Sub-titles also need to be in APA-style Title Face.

    There are numerous writing issues:

    "Cholesterol is an organic,waxy molecule ..." There is always a space following punctuation - this is a problem throughout your article.

    "That`s way (why) cholesterol ..."

    "Statins is (are) the only class of cholesterol ..."

    Do you have permission to use the images? They must be free of copyright restrictions.

    Finally, this is a saturated subject on the Internet. HubPages wants unique, magazine-style articles. There is nothing in your article that is new.

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    1. Janet Katsarova profile image52
      Janet Katsarovaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks.

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      1. Janet Katsarova profile image52
        Janet Katsarovaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Hello.Thanks again for your nice tips.My English is not 100% perfect.I am self-educated.No courses,no teachers,only books and dictionary.One of the reason to be here is to improve my English.The other one is to be useful with my hubs.I know HubPages wants unique articles.But my opinion is that if an article is unique it does not mean it is interesting for everybody.People have different kind of interests.For example I read only articles about health. Anyway thanks again for the help and sorry for my mistakes. Success here.

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  4. Kenna McHugh profile image83
    Kenna McHughposted 6 years ago

    You have some grammar errors and typos, so it needs proofing. For example. "That`s way cholesterol is so important and very low cholesterol can actually produce serious health problems."

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