I'd like feedback on my article: The High Value Woman: What Sets Her Apart in a.

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   Palmershadyposted 22 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: The High Value Woman: What Sets Her Apart in a World of Men?

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      theraggededgeposted 22 months agoin reply to this

      "It is a general mindset of men that women ought to be loving, caring, and attentive to their men and the people around them. Any lady lacking this ability is considered a part-time woman because she is not ready for a lasting commitment to people."
      
      Good grief. A 'part-time woman' because she's not ready to commit? How offensive.
      
      Sorry, but this attitude is straight out of the 19th century. The world has moved on.
      
      I find the whole article out of date and misogynistic. Why would you place a value on a woman according to a list of criteria? She's not a chattel.

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         Palmershadyposted 22 months agoin reply to this

         Okay! Thanks for your feedback.

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      WriterJanisposted 22 months agoin reply to this

      Umm.............I think Bev covered your content well so let me remark on a couple of other things. When I click on your photos, they bring me to articles written by other people on other sites. This is not acceptable on HubPages. You need to use photos that are in the public domain and then properly credit them including the author of the picture. Try looking for some on Wikimedia Commons.
      
      Also, you put an Amazon ad at the end of your article. HubPages is very strict on how you use these capsules. You can't just throw one in. It needs to be something you have personally used, then write out what it's about, your experiences with it, etc. Think of it as a mini product review.
      
      Hope this is helpful information.

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         Palmershadyposted 22 months agoin reply to this

         Thanks for your feedback. Your insights are helpful.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 22 months ago

   The article itself is written well, even if some seem offended by your words representing a woman.
   
   It is important to be a high value woman...maybe add that to title...like why it's important to be a high value woman???
   
   The first issue with your article are the pictures.
   
   You cannot link to other articles.
   
   Only a free to use picture which you can find on pixabay and etc. Is acceptable.
   
   Then add more photos that represent each section of your article.
   
   Or...you might also find a YouTube video to add to your article.
   A song...a piece from a standup comedian...something on high value women...??
   
   Keep editing.

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      Palmershadyposted 22 months agoin reply to this

      Wow! Thanks so very much.

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   psycheskinnerposted 22 months ago

   You might want to open with the audience for this article - because I don't think its the main audience Hubpages targets for traffic (and ad revenue)

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      Palmershadyposted 22 months agoin reply to this

      Okay! Can you say more about it? I can tell I have much more to learn from you guys. Thanks

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   psycheskinnerposted 22 months ago

   Hi there, what I am suggesting is to take a typical approach for writing a "help" hub. Think about the type of reader who will be looking for this information and how it will help them. 
   
   Writing in the introductory section to help that person know they are in the right place, and deflect people who will not enjoy the content.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 22 months ago

   I dont think it's necessary to change this to a How to article, but you still have pictures that go to links.
   
   You cannot link to canva or to another article that isn't even on Hubpages.
   
   Perhaps that article you used as a reference.  In that case...you can list it in a section for references.

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   Palmershadyposted 21 months ago

   Thanks to you all for your feedback: the article has been featured.

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