Hi Hubbers,
I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here is my article: WHAT TO DO WHEN YOUR ENEMY GET INTO YOUR HANDS? (must be signed in to view)
First impression:
TURN OFF YOUR CAPS LOCK AND GET RID OF THE EXCESSIVE BOLD FONT. IT LOOKS LIKE YOU'RE SHOUTING AT THE READER.
...see how annoying that is?
Your use of English is not up to the standard required by HubPages. Your title alone has a grammatical error in it and is a statement not a question so doesn't need a question mark.
A colloquialism such as "wanna" does not belong in a properly written article.
The use of all caps is inappropriate and is the equivalent of shouting.
Check out some articles from HubPage writers with high scores (above 90) to see how to present articles.
Take note of the criticism here and work on understanding how to write in English. The way this article is written is confusing at best.
Being literate is key to being a good writer. I recommend that you read some HP articles and get an idea of what it takes to write for HP. Then tackle writing an article.
Ask yourself: Who is your audience?
Tell a story, use real-life examples, and then proof your article, and proof it again.
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