I'd like feedback on my article: My Strategy for Investing

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   AndreiDposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve?
   Initially, I wanted the article to be more comprehensive, but then the total size would have made it unreadable. That I why I changed the idea, and want to have follow-up articles that go in dept for each direction of investment.
   Is the writing quality (spelling and formatting) the issue? As I am not an English native speaker, I acknowledge that in this department there can be failures that do not seem obvious to me.
   Or is it the format of the article itself?
   
   Best regards,
   Andrei
   Here is my article: My Strategy for Investing (must be signed in to view)

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   theraggededgeposted 5 years ago

   Hi there,
   
   Well, right off the bat, I would be out of that article for two reasons:
   
   1. You mention the summary. Anyone actually on your article page cannot see the summary, that's only visible from your profile. So your reader will be confused.
   
   2. You say you're not an expert and no one should use the article as a comprehensive (re)source for investment. In that case, what's the point of writing it? You may as well document it in a private journal.
   
   Get rid of the profanity. Not permitted.
   Shorten a good proportion of your sentences.
   Use more text capsules with properly capitalized sub-headings.
   Use sub-headings that might be picked up by a search engine.
   Put your links at the end of the article, otherwise you risk sending your reader off in another direction.
   
   That will do do for starters.
   
   Good luck.

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      TIMETRAVELER2posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      As noted above...plus...limit your topic to one type of investing and discuss it in depth.  Change the title to something more general because readers won't care about your strategy...they will want one that will work for them!

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   Kenna McHughposted 5 years ago

   You offer lots of information. Per above comments, you need to organize it, so it flows better for the reader. Also, cite your sources.
   This link should help you - http://hubpages.com/learningcenter/contents

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