I'd like feedback on my article: Data Science vs Data Mining - What’s Hot and...

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   Krati Darakposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Data Science vs Data Mining - What’s Hot and What’s Not? (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      I have a few 'don't's for you. Hopefully, if you implement them your article will improve.
      
      I think you have to avoid keyword stuffing. You used the word 'data' 78 times. Google doesn't like that, so try to eliminate as many instances as possible. Use 'information' sometimes.
      
      Don't capitalize the phrases, 'data science' and 'data mining' unless it is necessary to do so, certainly not in the middle of a sentence. The section under "Short Description" is full of unnecessary capitalisation. Those terms are not proper nouns.
      
      So, 'what's hot and what's not?' Where is the section that relates to your title? Don't use a catchy title unless your content actually reflects it.
      
      Don't use ampersands - & - in an article, write 'and' in full.
      
      Work on those, and then do a thorough proofread. Check your grammar. read the piece out loud to pick up any awkward sentences.
      
      Improve the formatting by breaking the text up into shorter text capsules. Use the built-in numbering and bullet points, rather than typing them in manually.
      
      You joined two days ago... have you spent some time at the Learning Center to research what kind of articles HubPages is looking for? Click Help, top right, to navigate there.
      
      Good luck.

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         Krati Darakposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks a lot! I have made the changes required and it has been published, you can have a look http://hub.me/amNQS Can it now get featured?

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            Marketing Meritposted 5 years agoin reply to this

            Suggest you remove the two links to your company, as it will probably be considered as self-promotion.

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               theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

               They weren't there when I looked at it.

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                  Marketing Meritposted 5 years agoin reply to this

                  Hi Bev. He seems to have removed the one that was in the article text. However, there is still a link to his company DataFlair, in the image source.
                  Loved the video of your daughter singing, by the way.

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               Krati Darakposted 5 years agoin reply to this

               Hi there! But it seems to have written in the guidelines "Your article can have a maximum of two links to any one domain. Links in the image source field in the Photo Capsule count toward this limit." then what is wrong?

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                  theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

                  You're not allowed to promote a business. The maximum two links to any one domain is to cover legitimate photo sources, references and things like that.

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