I'd like feedback on my article: Is Ncert Miscellaneous Exercise Important for..

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   ziyyaraposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Is Ncert Miscellaneous Exercise Important for Examination? (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      You can't promote your business at HubPages. You will have to remove the link to your blog and references to your company in your bio.
      
      HubPages is a site for writers, not marketers.
      
      Additionally there are English grammar errors throughout the article. For example, the adjective, 'miscellaneous', should not be capitalized unless at the beginning of a sentence. And 'felicitate' means something entirely different to 'facilitate'
      
      So, advice: remove marketing, proofread, and improve English.
      
      Good luck.

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      quotationsposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I did not read the entire article for the reasons explained below. However I read the first 25 percent or so, and also scanned the rest.
      
      Your spelling and English grammar are good and in my quick review I did not spot any errors except perhaps in the title itself (more later).
      
      I think your hub can be improved as follows:
      
      1. you need photographs or illustrations. Aim for at least 3. Make sure to use images that you are legally entitled to use and to provide the source.
      
      2. try to add at least one youtube video relevant to your topic.
      
      3. break up your article with headings. This improves readability.
      
      4. Despite the fact that the sentences were grammatically correct, I sort of lost interest in the article part way through. Part of the reason was the layout (lots of text and no headings or images) but the other reason was that I could not tell where you were going with your article. The title asks the question, "Is Ncert Miscellaneous Exercise Important for Examination" but you spent a lot of time explaining what Ncert is without answering your own question. Maybe try to edit to improve your exposition.
      
      5. Despite the fact that I did not spot errors in the article, I think the title is not grammatically correct.
      
      Hope this helps

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         theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         The first paragraph of the article is copied and pasted from here:
         
         http://ncert.nic.in/about_ncert.html
         
         The same error, advice instead of advise, is carried across.
         
         This is a promotional article.

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